Friday, 4 June 2021

🐉🐧Something I don't desire! - Poem

 


This week in L3 writing we had to write poems about penguins turning into dragons!🐧🐉

We had to write them because our term topic for term 2 is: the Little Blue Penguins.

This is my poem.

Something I don't desire!

I'm waddling through the fluffy snow, to get to my straw like home, when I arrive, something strives to try and eat me as a meal, but suddenly I feel tall and wide something rush's up inside!


I open my beak to say don't peek but, I'm far out of reach! I'm in a cloud, I cannot even see the ground!

I look down but all I see are my scaly wings, wait did I used to have these?


I cough out smoke and burp out fire this is something I don't desire!





1 comment:

  1. Aloha Rio,
    I like the way your poem rhymes. It reminds me of the time I had a dream, and I was a dragon. How did you come up with such a good poem? I really enjoyed reading your blog post Rio and I would love to read another one. Kamo Te Wehi Rio

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