On monday, week seven the year six's went to camp Kaitawa (I am a year six).
The week after the year six's came back the year six's had write reflection slides about camp Kaitawa, and the year five's had to write reflection slides about their week at school.
These slides down here are the slides I wrote.
Rio! That was awesome, but I bet you could add some more commas in your writing! Apart from that I think your slide was awesome way better than mine, I think; I'll make sure you get way more comments! Rio you rock!
ReplyDeleteGO rio !
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ReplyDeleteI really like how you have put lots of detail into the slide's now I understand way more on what you did at camp. Now I am really looking ford to going to camp next year.
PS: What were some of the animals name's.
Hi Rio, I like how you had heaps of really cool photos my favorite would the one on day 5 it was the hot spring photos. It reminds me of when I went there ( It was really fun like you had. ) Just wondering how was the camp concert? Aria
ReplyDeleteHi Rio, I love your blog it reminds me of camp and all the fun stuff we did, like the Onepoto Caves and Panekiri Bluff. I like how your presentation is done. Did you have fun at camp?
ReplyDeleteHi Rio I loved your slides they reminded me of camp. Do you really think cooks cove was bigger and harder than panikere?
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