Monday 24 May 2021

Aurora writing workshop

I got chosen along with other kids from other schools and two other girls in my class for a creative writing workshop by Aurora! We went to Eastwoodhill arboretum in term 1 and wrote  lots of words about Eastwoodhill, then in term 2 we went to holy trinity church to turn our words into poems! 

This is my poem (scroll to see)

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1 comment:

  1. Wow Rio - I can really tell you got into the moment at Eastwoodhill! You have really painted a picture in my mind... I like how you use the word extinguished. Remind me to show you girls the video of your time at Eastwoodhill.

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